
May 5th, 2008, 01:37 PM
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Re: College paper examining Stalin's leadership abilities in WW 2 - Comments please.....
I'd check your grammar too. The first error that stands out is in your opening line. 'attempted' seems like a better fit than 'attempt'.
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